The Redemption of Erâth: Slow Progress

I’d wanted to post the next chapter of book three (Ancients and Death) tonight, but unfortunately I’m not quite finished with it yet. I’m about 5,500 words through with it, but there’s still a fair chunk left to write (including a conversation with a warlord, I think). I actually got the best writing done this week on my iPad in the local library, which I suppose I shouldn’t be surprised by; I do tend to get distracted at home.

Once chapter ten is finished, we’ll be leaving Brandyé to his own devices for a bit focusing once more on Elven, who we last saw be appointed as a healer to the court of Kiriün. Over the following five chapters (chapters eleven through fifteen), we’ll see him grow and learn, find love and—I hate to say it—quite possibly suffer loss again. The third part of this book is called Death.

On another note, I was reading part of book two to Little Satis, and I think I’ve come up with a way to bring events forward a little, and make the whole story a little more cohesive, in line with what my editor wanted. It hopefully won’t involve any major rewrites, but will bring things like the Grim Watch into the story sooner. I feel like I’m dreadfully stalling with book two, but I want it to be the best it can possibly be, and I’m worried it’s not there yet.

Anyway, I’ll keep this update short for now, and look for the next chapter of The Redemption of Erâth: Ancients and Death next week! Thanks for reading!

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The Redemption of Erâth: Book 3, Chapter 9

Chapter 9: The Crossing of the World, Part I

There was much work to be done in preparation for the voyages of Ermèn, Athalya and Brandyé, and it was some weeks before they were able to make their way to the port of Viura Râ in search of a vessel that would take them hence. Brandyé came to the conclusion that, as high a position as the Sarâthen held in the world, even they were not able to travel on a whim to whatever kingdom took their fancy, or to speak with whichever leaders they desired. (It did not occur to him that the Sarâthen might well be able to do so, but he could not.)

There was much planning to be done, also—planning of where they would go, with whom they would speak, and what they would say. Over the following weeks Brandyé learned much of the world of Erâth, and it was all of it new, and different to him. Deep in his mind he knew that his own experience of the world, remembered or not, was as nothing compared to what he was about to discover; entire lands and countries awaited him, vast oceans to be crossed, mountains to be scaled, and plains to be traversed, and he marveled at what unimaginable wonders he would encounter there. In this regard, he could not wait to be departed, and each day that dawned ached with anticipation.

Yet another part of him, however, remained silent and sad, and it was this part that spoke to him of the mysteries of the world, and that there would soon be far fewer left than ever before. Erâth had, until that point, seemed unimaginably vast, and the thought that they were to cross the entire world from end to end in a matter of months frightened him. It seemed to him almost that the world ought to remain vast, and that they should be able to bridge its farthest corners so easily spoke to him of just how advanced the world of men was here. He knew in his heart that such travel would have been utterly impossible in his past life, and he yearned for a larger world, one in which he was familiar with only a part.

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The Redemption of Erâth: Book 3, Chapter 8

Chapter 8: The Council of Erâth

It was several days before such a meeting could be arranged, and he spent his time wandering the wondrous streets of Viura Râ, or deep in conversation with Ermèn. He learned much of the world of Erâth, and of the great city in particular. Viura Râ, it seemed, was a great hub of the world, a place where all the races of Erâth could meet and speak, without fear or violence.

Yet for all of that, there were folk missing, he now knew. Men were by far the most populous here in Viura Râ, but among them were to be found many tall, thin pale figures: the Illuèn. Every so often Brandyé caught glimpses of black-robed folk, and knew them as the Namirèn. Yet the Mirèn, whose likeness Brandyé knew only from the great statue at the center of the city, were nowhere to be found, and daily Brandyé was reminded that it was the doing of men—his own kind.

He was glad to know that the Duithèn had been banished from Viura Râ, for it lightened his time there. Often he would walk in the shadows of the great buildings, but never did he feel despair, and he found he could ascend to the heights of the spires whenever he desired it. There was much to be seen from those great heights, and he spent hours watching the port, or the folk far below.

As Brandyé waited to meet with the council that Ermèn and Athalya were arranging, he found himself often wondering at the rest of the world, and how it compared to Viura Râ. Even here he could not escape the rumors of unrest and war, and one day he asked Athalya her thoughts on the matter.

“War is always on the horizon,” she said. “It is the doing of men, working under the influence of the Duithèn.”

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