The Redemption of Erâth: Book 2, Chapter 7

Chapter 7: An Unlikely Encounter

The nameless old man’s home seemed impossible to Brandyé; a door in the trunk of an enormous tree, low so that he had to stoop, and then stairs that led deep below the earth. Had Brandyé not been following him, he would have passed the entrance unaware of its existence. It made him wonder whether there might not be other homes in the forest that he had passed.

At the foot of the stairs was a cave of earthen floor and walls, yet it was clean and warm and comfortable. A hearth had been carved from the wall at one point, and a welcoming fire blazed within it, the smoke whirling inexplicably up and out of the cave, though there was no obvious opening. Candles burned here and there so that the cave was well-lit, and Brandyé could see the clutter and paraphernalia of a well-lived home.

There was a passage that led from this main room, but it was dark and the old man did not bother with it. Instead, he beckoned Brandyé to sit at a small table near the fire, and fastened a kettle above the flames. “Ah!” he said. “We shall have tea indeed, soon.”

Brandyé was still so utterly mystified that he could but act as though all of this was utterly normal, and asked, “Is there any biscuit, or bread?”

“No,” replied the old man. “But there is something better – caterpillar loaf.”

Brandyé was not sure he had heard correctly. “I beg your pardon – did you say caterpillar loaf?”

“I believe so,” said the old man. “Did you hear something different?”

Brandyé shook his head. “Is it what it sounds like?”

The old man frowned at him. “What does it sound like to you?”

Brandyé was befuddled. “It sounds like it is made from caterpillars.”

The man smiled. “Then so it must be! I grind them and bake them – it is quite a treat.”

And as Brandyé watched, the old man bumbled about, gathering mugs and plates and knives, and from a pantry in the wall brought some butter and what appeared to be a small loaf of bread, but of a greenish color. Brandyé felt bile, but insisted to himself that he at least be polite with this strange person.

Soon the kettle was whistling, and the old man unhooked it from the hearth and poured it into the mugs. He then ground herbs into the steaming water, and suggested they wait a few moments while the tea brewed. He cut a slice of the loaf, and offered it to Brandyé. “I prefer mine plain,” he said, “but you may wish to have some butter with yours.”

Without a word, Brandyé took the loaf, and inspected it carefully. He saw no legs or antennae or other signs that it was made of what the old man had suggested, but it certainly was not bread as he knew it. With a knife he cut some butter, spread it over the slice, and took a bite.

He was quite surprised to find that it in fact had quite a light and sweet flavor, and as the scent of the tea began to reach him, he realized it was a perfect compliment. “It is quite good,” he said with his mouth full.

“Thank you.” The old man smiled. “The butter is made from flies’ eggs.”

Brandyé stopped chewing, and focused upon the man once more. “Truly?” he mumbled.

“At least, that is what I put into it.”

Brandyé paused, and wondered if he could swallow what was in his mouth. After a moment, though, he recalled that he had eaten things not so dissimilar during his solitude by the Black Sea, and in any case, the knowledge hadn’t changed the flavor, which was still pleasant.

“Is the taste familiar?” the old man asked.

“It is,” Brandyé admitted. “Some years ago I was forced to live on my own with no provisions. There were occasions when such things were all I could find, though I burned them first.”

“Interesting,” the old man mused. “Shall I burn your loaf for you?”

“No – it’s very nice the way it is.”

“I am glad,” the old man said. “I am glad also, that we should meet. I have wished to speak with you for some time.”

Brandyé took a sip of tea, and said, “I do not understand you. You act as though you know me, but it is impossible that we should have ever met.”

“It is?” The old man seemed curious, and amused. […]

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The Redemption of Erâth: Book 2, Chapter 6

Chapter 6: The Old Man in the Woods

The rain had ceased and a canvas covered him by the time he next knew the world. Before the opening of his eyes, sound came to him, and he heard the lapping waves of a calmer sea, the rush of a light breeze, and the crackling of a small fire. For many minutes he remained thus, until he heard a voice speaking to him. Its sound was familiar, but his mind would not let him recognize the speaker, nor understand their words.

With a great effort Brandyé rolled to his side, and discovered that it was damp sand upon which he was lying, for his nose dug into it and breathed it in before he knew it. He spluttered and snorted, raising himself and trying to blow his nose with his hands. If nothing else this brought him fully to his senses, and as he opened his eyes and looked about him, he saw Khana was sitting on a log beside him, a small fire burning before him.

“Alive you are,” he said, and Brandyé was this time able to focus and understand his words. “Your passing I feared.”

Brandyé tried to speak, but his throat was cracked and dry, […]

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Update on The Redemption of Erâth: Exile

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After almost three weeks of wading through an ever-thickening fog of exhaustion, I finally managed to get a reasonable amount of sleep today. The result? I managed to sit down and write 1,000 more words of The Redemption of Erâth: Exile. This puts be about ¼ through Chapter 6, which is encouraging. Baby steps. I don’t want to start working myself into the ground again by writing until 1:00 AM and then getting up at 6:00 AM again. I know there are some people who can do that, but I’m not one of them.

I know you’ve all been waiting anxiously for news of Brandyé, and I promise to let you know as soon as Chapter 6 is done. There are a lot of things happening for me over the next few weeks, but perhaps after that I’ll be able to really get back into the swing of things.

On a side note, I’ve finally got the manuscript for The Redemption of Erâth: Consolation off to my editor, which is moving me considerably closer to finally getting it published. Aren’t you excited to think you could be holding a real, in-your-hands paper copy of my first book? Or maybe it’s just me…

Thank you for bearing with me. I will get there.

 

Satis – 2013