The Redemption of Erâth: Book 2, Chapter 18

And another chapter in a day…! I’m starting to scare myself. These are not short chapters.

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Chapter 18: A History of Kings

The first, most prominent and unmistakable thing Brandyé noticed about the City of White Stone is that it was built almost entirely of stone whose color was so black he could scarcely fathom it. The size of the city was equally unfathomable, stretching for what Brandyé estimated to be several miles in all directions from the base of the mountain. Its buildings rose ever higher as they approached the foot of the mountain, which was itself a monumental cliff, climbing thousands of feet into the air to a snow-capped peak. Below this, dominating the city like a towering lord of darkness was a great castle, built part into the rock itself, so that it seemed to grow from the living stone. Its spires were of a special magnificence, and he guessed that the tallest of them, a great round tower that rose to twin pointed rooftops, must have towered some eight hundred feet above the city below it.

And all of it black, black as the night. As they approached the edges of the city, Brandyé began to realize that the rock was not discolored or marked – it was black itself, had come out of the earth so, though from where he knew not – certainly the cliff that rose high over the city was not itself made of the same stuff.

The city was ringed by a great wall some miles out from the farthest buildings, and Brandyé thought it made the wall the Fortunaé had built around Daevàr’s Hut look like a garden fence. Some way before they reached it, Tharom brought them to a halt, and turned his horse to face them.

“We’re about to enter the city of Vira Weitor,” he said, “a place I’ve not been in ten years. When we approach the wall we will be greeted by ringing trumpets, but – I assure ye all is not what it seems.” He looked pointedly at Brandyé and Elven. “Ye’re outsiders here, and the law is harsh; do as I say, when I say to do it, or ye may not survive your time here.”

A shiver found its way down Brandyé’s spine, and he looked to Elỳn, whose face was grave.

“Follow me in single file,” Tharom continued, “with you—” he pointed to Tylan and Richmond “—in the rear. Do not break pace for any reason.” And he reared his horse around, and set off at a trot toward the enormous black wall.

“What does he mean, ‘the law is harsh’?” Elven whispered to Brandyé. “We’ve broken no laws!”

Looking up at the fast approaching wall and the towering gate, Brandyé said, “I have a feeling that we may be breaking a law just by being in this country.” He looked forward to Tharom. “I wonder what laws he is breaking by bringing us with him.”

True to his word, as they made the final few feet to the wall and its gate there came, loud and clear, the call of great trumpets, and without a pause in their pace the massive doors – also made of that same black stone – began ponderously to swing open. Passing through Brandyé saw they were dozens of feet high and of even greater width; a veritable army could pass easily through these gates. He wondered if at some point in the city’s history one had.

And then they were through, and the first outlying buildings – modest homes, here – began to approach them. Before long they were steering their horses onto cobblestone streets, and the buildings soon rose to tower above them. Brandyé found that the city was built on a series of ever climbing hills, and he found it curious to follow the winding streets up and down, sometimes not knowing what lay over the crest of the next hill. All around was more bustle and commotion than Brandyé could imagine, and as he passed through the city on their way inexorably toward the center he saw that there were within the town different sections, identifiable by the construct of the homes (closer now, it was apparent that not every building was made of that black stone) and the dress of the folk that inhabited them. It was clear that the poor folk took to the outskirts of the city, whilst further in, where the buildings grew tall indeed, was the realm of the rich. And through it all Tharom led them, and Brandyé wondered where in all of this magnificence a knight of the first order might live, and if they would be allowed to ascend even to the great castle that sat atop all.

As they moved on, Brandyé noticed that many of the folk stopped to watch them go by, a great curiosity on their faces, and he was gladdened to see that perhaps the misery of the southern towns had not reached as far as Vira Weitor. But as they went, a curious thing began to happen: he started to hear low voices, whisperings and mutterings, and before long he realized that among the common folk were men in leather and metal, spears and swords in hand, and these people were watching Tharom with an intense keenness.

And then, all of a sudden, Tharom came to a stop and called out to them: “Halt!”

Before them was a gate, heavy oak doors set in a wall that seemed to stretch left and right away from them through the entire town, and Brandyé realized that this was the inner city – likely a place that only the most privileged were allowed to go. He leaned out and looked forward, and saw a host of guards standing at the ready, a grim and determined look on their brows. “Who are ye, sir?” one of them called out.

“I am Tharom Hulòn, knight of the first order of the dragon,” Tharom replied, “and I have brought someone for the king to meet.”

There was a silence, and then a bout of nervous laughter went around the guards before the gate. Then the one who had called out before said, “If ye are indeed Tharom Hulòn, then ye know well what awaits ye here. Why’ve ye come back?”

“I have an introduction for the king,” Tharom repeated, “and yes – I know well what my fate is.”

“Ye’ve got nothing for the king,” the guard replied, “and I think ye’d best be getting off your horse, sir.”

From the back, Brandyé could not see what look might have crossed Tharom’s face, but a moment later he swung his leg over the horse and dropped to the ground.

“Your sword, sir,” the guard said, and to Brandyé’s surprise Tharom complied, releasing his scabbard from his belt and handing it over. The guard then looked back to the others. “Who’re they?”

“My companions,” Tharom said, “and I’d not have them share my fate.”

The guard shook his head. “Not yours to decide, sir,” he said. “Shackle them!”

Beside him, Brandyé heard Elven groan. “Again? Can’t a fellow visit a strange black city without being imprisoned?”

“I was imprisoned for years among the Cosari,” Brandyé said. “You grow to tolerate it.”

And then they were being dragged from their horses, and heavy manacles were locked around their wrists. The guards seemed taken aback by Elỳn’s stature, but they bound her hands all the same, and as one they were ushered through a small doorway in the wall beside the great gate.

Once through the wall Brandyé saw they were in a wide courtyard, a building with great stone steps leading to columned archways and doors at the far end. They were not led to this building but rather to another small doorway beside it, and from here they proceeded down a great number of stone stairways until Brandyé thought they must be below the entire city, hills or no. Lanterns and torches lit all, and he was unsurprised when they journey ended with iron bars. He was becoming used to being imprisoned by the people he met, and wondered if he would ever discover a country or land that welcomed folk openly.

He, Elven and Richmond had been placed into one cell with Elỳn and Tylan in another. Tharom was taken separately from them, and it was some time before they saw him again. Sighing, Brandyé settled himself to wait.

To his surprise, it was only a matter of hours before guards returned to their cells. “Ye,” one of them said, pointing at Elỳn, “come with me.” Another guard with a large bunch of keys unlocked her cell and beckoned her to exit. Tylan flinched, and for a moment Brandyé thought she might try to escape. The same thought clearly entered the guard’s head as well, for he put his hand to his hilt, but she made no further move and the guard locked the cell again.

Brandyé watched as Elỳn was marched off down the stone corridor and out of sight, but there were still guards remaining. One of them pointed to Elven. “Who are ye?” he asked.

Brandyé elbowed Elven and hissed, “Answer – we’ve nothing to lose!”

“My name’s Elven,” he bit out. “What’s yours?”

The guard’s eyes narrowed. “Play no games, son – ye’ll get hurt.”

“My name’s Brandyé,” said Brandyé, hoping to distract the guard. “I apologize for my friend – he’s not…feeling well.”

“He’d better start feeling better,” the guard replied. He motioned to the guard with the keys, who stepped forward and unlocked the cell door. The guard drew out his sword, and stepped inside. He held it out, tip to Elven’s throat, and said, “What’s brought ye here? We hear tell ye’re from the south.”

Elven swallowed. “We’re…we’re looking to overthrow Darkness.”

The guard laughed. “And ye think ye’ll find it here?”

“We don’t know where we’ll find it,” said Brandyé. “We don’t even know where we’re supposed to go. We were traveling with our friend, Elỳn – the woman you just took.”

The guard turned his sword on Brandyé. “That’s no woman, and ye know it. Tell me – what’re ye doing with her?”

“She rescued us,” Brandyé said. “We owe her our lives.”

Elven looked at Brandyé as he said this, but said nothing.

“And where exactly did she rescue you?”

“In the Trestaé—”

“Liar!” said the guard. “No one lives in the Trestaé.”

“My family and I lived there for over a year!” protested Elven.

The guard swung back to him. “I told ye not to play games – ye’d get hurt.” And as swift as a whip he swung the broad side of his sword against Elven’s face. Unprepared, Elven fell to the floor and cursed.

Brandyé knew better by now than to react, and Richmond seemed unperturbed, but Elven was furious. “If you do that again…”

“If I do it again, it’ll be the sharp edge,” the guard said. “Now – I’ll ask ye one more time. What brings ye to Vira Weitor?”

And then Tylan spoke, calling across the corridor: “We were hired, by Tharom Hulòn. All four of us.”

Slowly, the guard withdrew his sword from Elven, and turned to face her. “Hired by Hulòn, ye say? And where do ye live?”

“We’re from Hansel’s Foil,” Tylan replied. “It’s on the border of the Trestaé, but not in it.”

The guard grunted. “More lies, I reckon. But ye’re a better liar.” He grinned a crooked smile. “And a prettier one.”

Brandyé could hear Elven’s teeth grinding at the guard’s words, and put an arm out to restrain him. The guard noticed, and turned back to them. “Ye’re a fighter, eh? We’ll cure that.”

And he raised the sword again, but at that moment came a cry from down the hall: “Hold! They’re not to be harmed!”

The guard jerked around to see who had spoken. From down the corridor came yet another guard, panting and out of breath.

“The order comes from Dukhat himself,” the new guard said. “He’s just finished speaking to the Illuèn woman.”

The first guard’s eyes widened. “She can’t be,” he muttered. “There’s no such thing as Illuèn!”

“Nonetheless, he’s ordered the prisoners not to be harmed. He’ll be here in short order to interrogate the prisoners.”

The first guard turned back to Elven and sheathed his sword. “Play games with Lord Dukhat, and ye’ll more than get hurt,” he grinned.

Then he left, and for a while there was silence. Finally Brandyé broke it, asking to no one in particular, “Who is Lord Dukhat?”

But no one, not even Tylan or Richmond, had an answer, and Brandyé suspected he would soon enough find out.

Indeed, less than an hour later Brandyé heard a commotion from down the corridor, and suddenly a great troupe of men came into view, headed by an elderly man whom Brandyé could but assume was the aforementioned lord.

The man came to a halt before their cell, and Brandyé was caught by his dress; a tunic of green felt, on which was embroidered the same white dragon that Tharom had borne, an ornate sword at his side, and a great black cloak that billowed out behind him. Brandyé had never before laid eyes on someone who by his very appearance so deserved the title of Lord, and he was intimidated.

But when the man spoke, he voice was soft, and almost gentle. “Greetings, my fellow men. I am Lord Emilié Dukhat. You will address me as Lord Dukhat, or merely ‘sir’.”

“Why?” asked Elven, and inwardly Brandyé cringed.

Lord Dukhat fixed Elven with a potent stare. “Because it is polite,” he said. “And because I will have my guard run you through if you are disrespectful again.”

“Sir,” Brandyé said, a sudden thought occurring to him. “You are lord of the soldiers here?”

The man smiled. “Very good – so I am.”

“If I may ask – what do you fight against?”

“This is a peculiar beginning to an interrogation,” Dukhat said, “where the prisoners ask the questions.”

Brandyé bowed his head. “I meant no disrespect, sir. I am merely curious about our friend, Tharom, and his like.”

The strange, soft smile remained on Dukhat’s lips as he said, “Your friend, Tharom, has no like. He should not have come back, and he knew it. His fate now lies in the hands of the king. Your fates, however – they are mine alone.”

At this point Richmond, who had been silent all this while, broke in: “Your lordship – I’m not with these folk. I was taken against my will, and I’d gladly go home it ye’d let me.”

The old man turned on him. “You denounce your fellows, my friend,” he said. “You rode with them, you arrived with them, you are imprisoned with them. Have you no honor?”

This was a curious word to Brandyé, though he suspected its meaning from the old man’s tone of voice. Richmond looked suddenly frightened.

“I’ll leave you be this once,” the Lord Dukhat said, “but if you show disrespect again, you’ll not live to see another day.” Then he turned, and addressed Tylan and the others together. “I have spoken at length with your companion, Elỳn. She tells me she is of the Illuèn – a race that is all but myth. Yet I cannot deny her knowledge of our past is greater than almost any here, excepting perhaps our librarians. She spoke to me of kings of old, and the battles we once fought against the evils of Darkness.” He eyed each of them in turn. “She tells me one of you may be key in preventing their return.”

Brandyé shivered. Why would Elỳn have said such a thing?

“She would not tell me who – I believe she was trying to protect you. But I suspect I know which of you she spoke of.” And his eyes settled firmly on Brandyé, though he did not speak. “You should be grateful,” he addressed them all after a moment, “for her presence. The king has requested special accommodations be made for your friend, and as such you also are not to be harmed. I have truthfully but one question for you, and know that there is but one answer: you are now under the lordship of King Farathé, and will be from now until the ending of your lives. Do you swear to serve the king and his agents, and to do his bidding, whatever it may be?”

“If we refuse? Sir?” said Elven.

Dukhat smiled. “You can remain here, until the skin falls from your bones.”

“It seems we have little choice,” said Tylan. “If we agree to your terms, sir?”

Dukhat raised his eyebrows. “You may go free, within the limits of the city of Vira Weitor. Your names and countenances will be made known to the guards of the town, however – if you try to escape, you will be killed.”

There was then a long pause, during which Brandyé saw himself once more enslaved among the Cosari, or in the town of Daevàr’s Hut, hunted by constables and unable to flee. To be granted the freedom of an entire city, even with such limitations, was a freedom beyond any he was used to in his life. “I agree,” he said finally. He knew not what such a promise would ultimately entail, but he knew that he could not remain imprisoned for the rest of his life.

The Lord Dukhat smiled, and motioned to a guard, who moved forward to unlock the cell. “Good. I am sure you are anxious to be reunited with your Illuèn friend; there will be a brief swearing-in ceremony, and you will then be free to go.”

Brandyé stepped slowly from the cell, and looked about him. The guard gestured for him to continue down the passageway. As he passed Dukhat, the old mean leaned close to him. “I think you know what we fight, young man,” he said in a low voice. “I think you fight the same thing.”

And Brandyé shivered again.

 

Brandyé had held some secret hope that he might catch a glimpse of the king himself during the swearing-in ceremony, but it was in fact a small, short affair held in a small courtroom somewhere deep within the castle’s roots. He wondered if, now that they were to be set free, they would have their weapons returned to them – not that he was desperate for violence, but he felt guilty that Khana’s sword was no longer in his possession, and wondered about the fate of his crossbow. Weapons, however, were not permitted to civilians it seemed, as they were now deemed; they were turned loose in an open courtyard with a small sack of gold each, and the clothes on their backs. To his delight, however, Elỳn was waiting for them. She embraced Brandyé and Elven in a great hug, and bowed to Tylan and Richmond. Brandyé immediately wished to talk to Elỳn, but Elven said he was hungry, and Richmond seemed anxious to depart their immediate surroundings. “I don’t like these kingly folk,” he said grumpily.

In the end, Richmond took his leave of the group, and they were never to see him again. Brandyé had thought that Tylan would have wanted to leave also, but she seemed curiously attached to Elven, who for his part seemed unsure how to handle her attention. So it was that the three of them followed Elỳn from the castle and down into the city, and were soon lost to the bustle.

They soon found themselves in a dining hall, and over a hearty meal they discussed what their plans for the following days were to be.

“I must meet with the king,” Elỳn said. “I have had strange fortune here – all whom I have met have been willing to accept me as I am – as Illuèn.”

“Why would they not?” asked Elven.

“Did you believe in Illuèn before you met me?” Elỳn asked.

“I didn’t know such a people existed,” admitted Elven.

“So it is for most people here. If they know of the word ‘Illuèn’, it is only as a people of myth and legend. As luck would have it, the higher castes have a deeper knowledge of their country’s past, and some of them remember the old tales.”

“The same tales you and Athalya told us,” Brandyé said.

Elỳn nodded. “And more. You see, the Illuèn did not depart the world of men immediately following the great war of Darkness; we stayed, we tried to help rebuild. Unfortunately, in the wake of such disaster, the spirit of men became hard, and they resisted the aid of any they saw as outsiders.”

“I know little of the old stories,” Tylan said. “I’d love to hear more.”

“Do you read?” Elỳn asked her.

Tylan shook her head. “No need, where I live.”

“A shame. There is a place where you could learn all the history of this country your heart could desire.”

Brandyé, however, was enthralled by this idea. “Where is this?”

“Vira Weitor has, deep in the inner city, something that is as far as I know unique in all the world of men. It is a vast collection of all the writings that have been gathered over thousands of years. Some are so old they can no longer be handled, but there are scribes there that work day and night to rewrite the old scrolls. It is called a library.”

“Lord Dukhat mentioned something like that,” Brandyé said. “He said the librarians knew as much of the history of the world as you did.”

Elỳn smiled. “He flatters me, I think – they spend their lives surrounded by history. I suggest you look into it.” She looked to Tylan. “Perhaps Brandyé could read some of it to you.”

And so they did. The following day, when Elỳn had departed for her council with the king, Brandyé took Elven and Tylan deep into the inner city in search of the library. It turned out not to be difficult to find, for the great building with columned archways and enormous doors that they had spied when first entering the town was its entrance. Up the black stone steps they marched (Brandyé was slowly becoming used to the darkness of the buildings and streets), and in through one of the several open doors.

The sight that greeted their eyes took their collective breath away. As his eyes adjusted to the candlelit gloom, Brandyé saw they were standing on a balcony overlooking at least three floors of shelves, stacked floor to ceiling with scrolls, books, papers and other odds and ends. Enormous flaming chandeliers hung from the high, vaulted ceiling to varying heights, and candelabra along all walls made for ample light to read by.

And amongst the thousands and thousands of writings went to and fro hundreds of people, browsing, reading, writing or even just sitting and talking. It was unlike anything Brandyé had ever experienced in his life, and for many moments the three of them simply stood and stared, transfixed by the excessive display of history before them.

So taken was he that Brandyé hardly noticed an old woman approach them and ask, “Good morning, dears – can I help ye?”

“Are you a…” Brandyé searched for the right word. “…a librarian?”

The woman smiled. “Aye, I am! My name’s Esther. Is there a thing I can help ye find?”

Dumbfounded, Brandyé wasn’t sure what to say. “We were looking for…for anything, I suppose.” he laughed nervously. “I didn’t expect this place to be so…big!”

“We’ve never been before,” added Tylan.

Esther smiled again. “Ye came to learn something, no? What would ye learn, if ye could?”

And then a thought came to Brandyé: “Do you have anything about the old king, Daevàr?”

Esther’s eyebrows rose. “That’s a long history, ye’re asking for. D’ye want what’s known about him?”

“Yes,” said Elven, but Brandyé interrupted.

“Do you have anything written…written by him?”

The old woman gave Brandyé a sly look. “Aye – we have accounts supposedly written in his own hand. Would ye like to see?”

And so she led them through the labyrinthian building, in and out of rows upon rows of shelves, down stairs and up passageways, until finally they arrived in a small, secluded annex deep in the lower floor of the library.

“Few people concern themselves over the ancient histories,” Esther said as she pulled forth a number of small scrolls. “Ye might find these not so well cared for as they might otherwise be.” She handed one to Brandyé. “All of these date, as best as we can tell, to the time of Daevàr. The one ye’re holding is one that claims be be in the hand of the king himself. For certain it’s stamped with the royal seal, but there’s no verification of its origin, other than what the text itself reveals. I’ll leave ye to make up your own mind.”

And she turned to leave them. “Thank you!” Brandyé called after her, and she smiled back at him.

“Ye’re welcome, dear. I hope ye find what ye’re looking for.”

Elven looked at the scrolls that surrounded them, and turned to Brandyé. “What do you expect to find here?” he asked.

Brandyé shrugged. “I’m not certain. All I know is that Daevàr is the connection between this kingdom and Consolation, and he was singular in defeating Darkness before. Perhaps there is something among his writings that may leave a clue as to what we must do next.”

And so they spent the next few hours perusing the many documents and scrolls about them, Brandyé often musing to himself, while Elven tried to read things to Tylan. Soon Brandyé found he had lost track of the hours, and in the dim dungeons there was no sign of the passing of the day. Through and through he read, finding that there was an enormous quantity of material that pertained to the partitioning of resources after the war, the numbers and names of soldiers, and even the treaties between Erârün and the neighboring kingdom, Kiriün.

And then, finally, his eyes lighted upon a document entitled On the Defeat of Goroth and Darkness.

“Come here!” he called to Elven and Tylan. “Listen.” And he began to read the following:

 

There is little I can write about the ending of the great War of Darkness that will not be recounted by other historians beyond number. How true these histories will be remains to be seen, but I can at least in these pages attest to what I bore witness to, and the part I played in the slaying of the most demonic man to ever walk the face of Erâth. Even those closest to me do not know of my intended departure from these lands, and I would have this document stand as a record for what I have done.

I cannot hide from the shame of my deceit; nor do I seek forgiveness. I did as I thought was best for the survival of my people, and so my people survived – though many now lie dead. Had I been honest – had I not allowed Starüd of Kiriün to believe the Illuèn had agreed to come to our aid – perhaps all men under the sun would now lie dead. Or perhaps not…who can say?

I would have it known at least that I did not cower here in the towers of Vira Weitor; I rode out to meet our foe head-on, and swung my blade as earnestly as the hardiest of my soldiers. I could not know what was awaiting us – I did not know that Goroth, the master of Darkness, had brought with him beasts of a terrible nature that would slaughter our men where they stood.

It is already known to many that the battle of the Ertha-Nÿn River was a turning point in the tide of the battle; but it was no doing of Erârün that the armies of Darkness fled and retreated. Both then and at Goroth’s final defeat, it was the Dragon Lords who made Goroth’s undoing possible. I recall it now as though it were happening before me: how the great winged beast soared overhead, and was struck down by Goroth’s terrible black sword; how its rider valiantly stood his ground as Goroth approached him; how he drove his sword deep into the Demon Lord’s side even as his dragon breathed its last flame upon him. I recall: I cried out in anguish, in terror, and in hope. And when the smoke faded, Goroth was being dragged on his knees from the scene by his own soldiers.

How we cheered that night – how our soldiers celebrated. Yet I knew in my heart that Goroth was not defeated, and I felt the Darkness in his heart: he would not surrender. I allowed my men time to recover, of course; but I also urged them, wounded, exhausted and miserable, to march north to reengage the enemy. I question my decision privately every day; how many lives might I have spared had we retreated then? How many men might have returned to their families?

Yet how many families might have died, years or centuries hence, when Goroth returned? I had seen him in battle, and I knew what he was: more, and less than a man, he would not die if he were not killed. I watched his sword draw mens’ lives without a scratch. I watched him stand down a dozen good men at once. And I saw him – I saw him turn the waters of the Ertha-Nÿn black by his very touch.

So it was I spoke to the commanders of Kiriün and the Illuèn and the Dragon Lords, and it was I who convinced them to march onward, through the cold and the mountains to where Goroth had retreated: the foot of the Bridge of Aélûr.

I will admit my courage failed the day we broke the final crest and looked down upon his stronghold: surrounding that great bridge and for miles along it, there must have been twenty thousand men and beasts gathered. I knew we could not win through strength of numbers, yet I knew we also could not retreat.

So we surrounded them as best we could, and we advanced upon them as best we could, and we died as best we could. I led a party of men in the wake of dragon’s breath, and we were able to break through to the very foot of the bridge itself. Yet the enemy lines had closed behind us, and I began to know that death was now inevitable.

Some goodness looked upon us that day, though. In spite of the soldiers and fierundé and skøltär, my men stood their ground and did not flee, even when we saw the great figure of the Demon Lord in the distance approaching. He bore down upon us, his black blade gleaming in his hand, but before he could reach us – while he was still upon the foot of the bridge – a dragon came crashing down, crushing those beneath it. As the rider stood I recognized him as Scelain, the king of the Dragon Lords. And then – never did I think any mortal man could stand for so long against the Demon Lord.

For an eternity their blades clashed, and in vain I tried to make my way to them, to their aid. The Dragon Lords had come to ours unasked, and I would not let such a man die for nought. Alas, I was too late. Even as I slew the last soldier of Aélûr that stood between me and they Goroth plunged his terrible sword into Scelain’s breast, and the man died in writhing agony.

It was then that the king’s dragon rose up in its final moments, and loosed its claws and fire upon Goroth. When the thrashing had stopped and the smoke had cleared I saw to my astonishment that Goroth was on his knees – and that his sword had fallen from his hand.

What I did next, I did without thought. I was hardly conscious of lifting the dark blade, barely noticed how light it was in hand. All I knew was that this was the one, the only chance there would ever be of defeating Goroth once and for all. And so I ran him through with his own blade.

I have no recollection of what occurred after that. When I next knew the world I was in a battle tent, my arm in agony and wounded men all around. It was some time before I could hear from another the news: the armies of Darkness had fled. We had won.

A year now has passed, and my arm has poorly healed. No word of the armies of Darkness has reached my ears: no sign of evil men, or of fierundé or other beasts. The bridge to the country of Aélûr, the great crossing of the sea, is broken. The armies that live in that place – if they live still – can not cross into our land. The sea there has been poisoned, some say; it is black in color, and sickens any who touch its waters.

It seems that we are finally in a place of peace. My people are finishing their mourning, and rebuilding has begun. The ruined towers of Vira Weitor are to be rebuilt in dragonstone; black, in honor of those beasts that gave their lives for our salvation. I have heard nothing of the Dragon Lords themselves, and fear for their survival. Their king is slain, and they are a reclusive race. I hope they continue to thrive.

There are other things that trouble me, however. While the terrible creatures of Aélûr are no more, there were thousands who stood on our side of the bridge when it was broken; where they have gone to I do not know, but I fear their reappearance in time. Without the power of Goroth – without the power of Darkness – they are weakened, but they could nonetheless present a very real threat to the northern villages one day.

I also fear for the relationship between my kingdom and its neighbors. The Illuèn no longer speak to us and are departing our lands, and Kiriün has severed all ties. I know it is but what I have wrought upon us by my deceit, but I cannot help but feel my people are being punished for their own salvation.

And there is another thing that I cannot keep my mind from: the sword of Goroth. I see it in my hand even to this day, though I know not what became of it. It was as long as a man, yet its weight was no more than that of a small dagger. Its steel was a dreadful black, darker still than dragonstone, and I recall the terrible feeling I had when holding it: the sensation that I was more than myself. I could feel the life-force of hundreds flowing through my veins, and I think this was the weapon’s power: it did not just slay by hacking and cutting, but by taking the very power from the lives it ended.

It is this that troubles me more than any other thing: I used this blade to slay the Demon Lord. What terrible power must now be infused with that blade, wherever it may be? What life-force does it now possess? If the sword’s victims live on within it, then does the Demon Lord live on as well?

Why did I use that blade?

What have I done?

The Redemption of Erâth: Book 2, Chapter 17

So I’ve managed to write another chapter, in a single day! What’s going on?

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Chapter 17: Vira Weitor

And so they ran, Brandyé leading, Elven now limping behind, and Elỳn at the rear, closest to the oncoming beasts. The path began to rise, mounting a small hill, and Brandyé could feel his legs starting to give out – he could run no further. His pace slackened, and Elven was soon pacing beside him, the terror on his face a mirror for Brandyé’s own.

And then Brandyé heard behind him a fierce cry and his heart leapt into his throat, for it was Elỳn, and he had never heard her utter such a sound before. Without thinking he stopped and turned, Elven carrying on past him. What met his eyes was astonishing.

Elỳn was surrounded by half a dozen fierundé, and from within her robes she had drawn forth a glowing blade and was sweeping it to and fro, keeping the animals at bay even as they snapped their jaws at her. He cried her name, but among the howling and snarling and thunder she either did not hear him, or chose to ignore him, for she did not waver in her warding off of the fierundé.

Elven was now far past him, and he heard him cry out, but at the same moment one of the fierundé leapt at Elỳn and all other thought was drowned out as his heart stopped. The world seemed to slow down around him, and for a moment it felt as though the rain lifted, and he saw only the beast’s flight through the air, its claws outstretched toward Elỳn’s throat, and the upward thrust of her blade as it pierced through the animal’s jaw, before it collapsed upon her and she was driven to the ground.

“No!”

All danger was forgotten, and he began to race back down the slope toward her, Fahnat-om pointing at the beasts. And then, as he drew near, he felt a hum in the air, and suddenly the earth erupted between the ring of fierundé and himself and he was thrown to the ground. Light blinded him, and as the deafening crack of thunder subsided he heard only yelps and howls. Blindly he clambered to his feet again and stumbled wildly, swinging Fahnat-om madly in the hope that it might strike one of the fierundé. Instead, he heard the distinct clang of steel against steel, and bewildered, he blinked away the lightening’s afterimage to find himself staring at Elỳn, her sword raised to meet his in its path through the air.

“Heed your sword,” she said, panting, “or you might cleave more than you intend!”

Suddenly horrified at what he had almost done, Brandyé lowered his weapon and looked about him. After the brightness of the lightning strike he could see almost nothing in the dark, but he had the sense that the fierundé had – if only momentarily – fled. “Are you all right?” he asked.

“I am uninjured,” she said. He saw that she was coated in a foul black substance, and she noticed his gaze. “Their blood, not mine.”

“Brandyé! Elỳn!” came Elven’s voice from afar.

“Elven!” returned Brandyé. “Where are you?”

“Come, quickly – you must see!”

Perplexed, Brandyé turned once more up the hill to follow the path, Elỳn beside him. Before long they had crested the summit, and it was then that Brandyé saw what Elven wished them to see. Laid out before them in the low of the valley was a great array of torches and lights, lining wet and muddy streets and paths. Dozens, if not hundreds, of buildings and homes stretched out into the distance, and surrounding them all was a great wall of spiked wooden poles, at least twenty feet in height.

“The village…” Brandyé muttered, and then to Elỳn, “You were right – you were right!”

“Hansel’s Foil,” she agreed. “But we are not safe yet. Hurry!”

Down the hill they trudged, slipping and sliding in the mud, and before long they had reached the wall that surrounded the town. There was a door in the wall to which the road led, but it was shut against them. Desperate, Brandyé ran to it and began pounding upon it mercilessly, calling, “Please – let us in, let us in! We are being chased!”

But there was no answer, bar the distant howls of the fierundé. They had scattered at the lightening strike, but they were not cowardly beasts, and clearly had already begun to regroup. It would not be long before they saw they red eyes cresting the top of the hill, Brandyé thought.

Elven joined him in his pounding, screaming for all his might: “Let us in!”

For several minutes they remained there, stuck between the approaching fierundé and the impassable wall, and for all their calling and cries there was no answer. Finally, Elỳn said, “Enough – this is of no use. Elven, take one of your arrows and fire it over the wall. With luck, it will be seen by someone.”

“What if it hits someone?” he asked.

“I very much hope it does not.”

In the dark and the rain, Brandyé saw Elven draw forth another of the Illuèn’s glowing arrows and affix it to his bow. Aiming high above their heads, he loosed it, and away it flew, high, up, and then down, and over the wall.

For a moment there was silence, and Brandyé was encouraged to look once more behind them. To his sudden terror, he could see the dim shapes of the fierundé, now making their way down the path and the hill, their eyes glowing miserably. They had ceased their howling, and come upon them in silence.

“Please, let someone open this door,” he murmured. And then, just as he was about to draw out Fahnat-om for one, final death stand, there was a sudden scraping sound, and a porthole in the door swung back.

“This be yours?” said a voice, and the arrow that Elven had shot was suddenly flung back at them. The tone of the voice was lost on Brandyé; the act of the person to whom it belonged was ignored; all he knew was that the voice was human, and that he understood it.

“Please – let us in!” he cried once more. “We’re almost dead!”

But the door did not open; instead, the voice continued, “Who are ye? Comin’ from the south in the mid o’ night’s a bad sign.”

“We mean no harm!” called Elven, “but please – the fierundé are almost here!”

Then there was a pause, and the voice said, “Fierundé? The fierundé don’ come this far—”

And then Elỳn interrupted with, “They are here now, and if you don’t let us in we will be dead in under a minute!”

Perhaps it was the unusual accent she bore, or perhaps the female tones of her voice, but at her words there was suddenly a great scraping as of a huge latch being lifted, and the door swung inward. Overjoyed, Brandyé pushed forward with Elven and Elỳn, and in a moment they were inside the village.

“Quick – bolt the door!” Elỳn cried, and the old man whose voice they had been hearing nodded, swinging the door shut and dropping the heavy wooden bolt that kept the door shut. Not a moment too soon was it, for in only a moment came furious howls and snarls, and the scraping of many claws against the wood.

“That’ll hold ’em,” the man said. He turned, and his eyes widened as he took in their appearance. “Bless me,” he said. “Ye’re not from ’round here, are ye?”

Brandyé could but shake his head, but Elỳn said, “We are from the south, yes – but we intend no harm.”

“That remains to be seen,” said another voice. Turning, Brandyé saw a man in what was clearly a uniform of some kind standing before them, several guards carrying spears on either side. “Gaillard – did you let these folk in?”

The old man nodded. “The fierundé were on them,” he said. “They’d’ve died—”

“Better they than us,” the officer snarled. “You could’ve let them in as well!” Then he turned to the three companions. “Welcome to Hansel’s Foil. You’ll surrender your weapons now, or I’ll have my guards finish the fierundé’s work.”

“What?” Elven exclaimed. “We just told you we mean no harm—”

“‘No harm’ doesn’t arrive armed with glowing arrows,” the officer said. “Now – your weapons.”

Elven looked ready to continue arguing, but Elỳn whispered, “Do as he says – we can’t afford to battle these folk.”

Brandyé took heed at once, sheathing Fahnat-om and laying it upon the wet ground, and Elỳn followed him with her own glowing sword. Elven hesitated a moment, and then with a deep scowl laid down his bow, and scattered the remaining arrows on the ground. Brandyé also retrieved his crossbow and placed it in the mud as well, carefully.

The officer seemed satisfied, and motioned to his guards. They moved forward, and at a prod from their spears set the three companions walking forward. Through the village they passed, though Brandyé saw little; the sky was now black, and the only light came through curtained windows here and there. There were many torch posts on the sides of buildings, but in the rain none were lit. Brandyé could not help but notice that almost every home was built of wood, and he wondered what would happen should a candle inadvertently drop upon a curtain.

Brandyé had enough experience with being captured to know where they were being taken, and sure enough they soon found themselves in a small cell, one among many, iron bars on every side. This was the justice house of the town, Brandyé guessed, for they shared the space with several others, most of whom appeared bruised and drunk.

Though the cell was far from comfortable, the guards did at least bring some bread and water before they left them in the darkness. Suddenly ravenous, Brandyé and Elven did not hesitate to tear into their meal, while Elỳn sat peacefully to the side and gazed out through the bars.

After the last crumbs were gone and the last drops drunk, Brandyé finally turned to Elỳn. “What are we to do now?”

“Although we are captured, we are also safe,” she said. “One cannot complain about the nature of one’s salvation.”

“How long will they keep us here, do you think?” asked Elven.

“There is no knowing,” she replied. “However, I do not think it will be long; we are far too strange and unusual to be kept in a common prison cell for the rest of our lives.” And she smiled at them.

She was not wrong, for the following morning the officer from the previous night came to see them. For a long time he did not speak, and gazed particularly hard at Elỳn. She returned his gaze passively, and Brandyé knew he was trying to decide exactly what she was. Eventually he relented, and spoke to them. “I apologize for the conditions under which ye’re bein’ kept. If by nothin’ other than the surrender o’ your weapons, ye’ve showed us peace. Still – law is the law, and outsiders from the south are to be treated hostile.”

“Why?” protested Elven.

The officer looked at him oddly. “Ye’ve come from the south, no?”

“Yes,” Elven acknowledged.

“Then ye know that what dwells there’s evil.”

“We’re not!”

“The luck o’ it is, it’s not my place to say. There’s another wants to meet ye.” He turned from them and barked out to the guards that had accompanied him, “Get the rest o’ these folk out, he’ll not want to see hungover scum!”

There was a general bustle then as the occupants of the other cells were unlocked, unchained and dismissed, most of them still staggering from the drink of the night before. Some of them were aware enough to stare at the three of them through the bars, eyes always lingering on Elỳn’s cloaked and hooded face. Brandyé wondered how she managed to stay so calm with so many people staring at her; were it him, he would be burning with shame by now. Then he thought that perhaps he was glad that for once it wasn’t himself that was the cause of all the attention.

Before long the place was empty, and as Brandyé and Elven finished their breakfast (more bread, yet welcome – it was fresh, and well-baked), they heard a commotion, and voices outside.

“…keep her locked up?”

“Ye know the law as well as I, and they’re from the south!”

“D’ye see her face, or not?”

“Aye—”

“Then what were ye thinking?”

And then two men entered the building – the officer from before, following a man whom at only a glance Brandyé knew to be a soldier. He wore no armor, though Brandyé could immediately imagine him in it; rather, he was dressed head to toe in the finest cloth, leather bracelets around his forearms, and a great crest adorned his chest – stitched white against the green cloth, a curled dragon. An ornate sword hung at his side, and Brandyé had no doubt that it had seen action; the scabbard was well-used but clearly cared for, the pommel worn to a shine.

“Is this her?” the soldier asked.

The officer bowed. “Yes, sir.”

The soldier approached the bars and looked in. He glanced in passing at Brandyé and Elven, but focused his gaze on Elỳn almost immediately. “Greetings,” he said. “I am Tharom Hulòn. Who are ye?”

For a moment Elỳn was silent as she returned the man’s gaze, and Brandyé broke in, “I am Brandyé, and—”

“Didn’t ask ye,” the soldier said without taking his eyes from Elỳn, and Brandyé fell silent.

“I am Elỳn of the Illuèn,” Elỳn said finally, “and these are Brandyé and Elven. They are my traveling companions, and I would have you treat them as you would treat me.”

Tharom seemed to consider her words for a moment, before saying, “Ye have a white face and ye come from the south. What proof do I have that ye’re truly Illuèn?”

And then Elỳn stood and drew back her hood so that her white hair fell over her shoulders. She stood a full head taller than the soldier, who was himself taller than either Brandyé or Elven, and looked down upon him. “I offer no proof but my countenance, and the weapons that were taken from us last night,” she said, “though you have already seen them, have you not? You are Tharom Hulòn, knight of the Fourth Guard of the Dragon, and you are far from home. Tell me, what brings a proud knight so far from Vira Weitor, to the southern fringes of Erârün?”

At her words the knight seemed startled and almost disturbed, and it was a moment before he replied, “Ye know much, Elỳn of the Illuèn; I will take your word – for now.”

He turned to the officer that had imprisoned them and said, “They’re to be released into my custody.” As the officer moved to unlock the prison cell, he said to them, “Your weapons stay with me, and if I hear breath of misdeed, I’ll have ye back in manacles.” The cell door swung open, and Tharom motioned for them to follow him. “For now, ye look like ye could use a bed – and a warm bath.”

Brandyé’s spirits lifted somewhat at these words as they followed Tharom out of the building, for a bed and bath were by now luxuries beyond his wildest dreams. However, as they began to walk through the town, Brandyé began to think that the inhabitants of Hansel’s Foil did not share in his enthusiasm. Most of the folk they passed looked dirty and tired, plodding along as though they truthfully had no desire to be where they were going. So gloomy were their faces that Elven leaned over to Brandyé and said, “All these folk – they’re acting as though someone has died.”

The thought had occurred to Brandyé. “Perhaps someone has.”

Tharom overheard them and said, “Nay – no one’s died. Ye’re not likely to see much cheer south o’ Bridgeden, though; and these days, not much north o’ it either.”

“What does that mean?” Elven called after him, but the knight refused to elaborate. Brandyé turned to Elỳn.

“What is he talking about?”

But Elỳn seemed curiously distracted, her eyes fixed on Tharom. “This man, Tharom…” she muttered. “He is aware – much more aware than most men.” She blinked, and turned to Brandyé. “We shall do well to bide by this man – I do not know why he was exiled to the south, but he knows of the coming Darkness.”

“Exiled?” repeated Brandyé, but she would say no more.

Soon they found themselves in the entrance to an inn, and Brandyé could not help feel a sharp pang of nostalgia as he looked around, so similar was it to the Burrow Wayde and other inns in Consolation. He barely registered Tharom ordering three rooms and hot baths to be drawn, and fresh linens. By the tim Brandyé was in his room alone, the impending comfort was too much to bear, and as he stripped he nearly dove into the deep, hot tub of water that had been provided. He had intended to wash and then make his way downstairs for some food, but within moments he had fallen fast asleep in the tub of water, and did not wake for some hours.

 

Over the following few days, Brandyé and Elven roamed the town of Hansel’s Foil, which was large, though not nearly as large as Daevàr’s Hut had been. They soon became accustomed to the strange accent the folk here had, and Brandyé was glad that he did not have yet another language to learn. He still did not have any mastery over the ancient tongue that Elỳn and Schaera used amongst themselves, though he was beginning to understand a few words here or there.

As for Elỳn, she spent nearly all her time deep in conversation with Tharom, either over tea or ale at the inn or walking through the streets of Hansel’s Foil, and for all that time Brandyé did not see her except for evening mealtimes. When he asked her what they had spoken of she would only smile, and so it was a mystery to Brandyé when she came to them on the seventh day of their stay there and said, “I have convinced Tharom to take us north – possibly as far as Vira Weitor. It is a long road, but there are villages on the way, and with luck we might arrive there the week after next.”

“What of the fierundé?” Elven asked – a thought that was also on Brandyé’s mind.

“There has been no sign of them outside of the walls of the village for six days,” she said. “I believe they have retreated.”

“They could be tricking us,” Elven said.

But Brandyé did not think so. “I have not felt their presence for some time,” he said with a nod to Elỳn. “Although – if they do approach again, we’ll be in open land with no defenses.”

“Not quite,” said Elỳn. “I could not convince Tharom to return to us our weapons, but we will have a guard, and we will be on horses.”

“They can outrun horses,” Brandyé said darkly.

“There is danger, yes. But it is a journey we must take. Our trip will have been in vain if we allow the fierundé to capture us here.”

To this there was little Elven or Brandyé could say, and so they allowed themselves to be led to a nearby stable, where Tharom was waiting for them.

“Ye can ride?” he asked, and both Elven and Brandyé nodded. “Good. Ye’ll have a steed each – Elỳn has hers all picked out already. We’ve packed already, and we’ll be leaving in a few minutes. I’d like ye to meet our guard, too: this is Tylan, and Richmond.”

A woman and a man were there, both dressed in leather armor and with a sword at their side. The woman bowed slightly to them, but the man, Richmond, only scowled. “I beg your pardon,” Tharom said in a low voice, “for they hardly wish to be going. They were, ah – recruited be the word.”

“From where?” Elven whispered to Brandyé.

But there was no answer to be had, and soon they were riding through the village, passing through the dismal streets to the town’s north entrance. Brandyé felt a nervousness grow in his stomach as they drew near, for it was only once they were out of the town and into the open countryside that they would know for certain if the fierundé had indeed abandoned them or not.

Then they were before the gate, and two men pulled the great door open, and then they were through and trotting along the damp earth road, northward and away from safety. It was not long before Hansel’s Foil had retreated from view completely, and all around them was the quiet wind blowing through the tall grass, and only the odd tree dotting the landscape provided any relief from the dreariness of it all. Only when three hours had passed without sign of fierundé did Brandyé allow himself to relax his guard, and even then only such that he was not constantly looking every which way about him.

For most of that first day they proceeded in silence, stopping only now and then to let the horses rest. Tharom told them that the town of Bridgeden was a five-day ride, and they would decide at that point if he was to accompany them to Vira Weitor or not. Brandyé did not understand why he would not wish to see this great city, the sight of which even he was becoming increasingly agitated to see. “I think he will,” Elỳn confided secretly, but would say no more.

Brandyé himself felt somewhat intimidated by this knight and his secrecy, something which Elỳn was doing nothing to help with, but on the third day of their march Elven summoned the courage to bring his horse alongside Tharom’s and asked him, “What do you know of where we’re going?”

Tharom appeared to survey Elven for a moment before replying, “What would ye have me tell ye?”

Elven shrugged. “I understand we’re going to a place called Bridgeden, and then on to somewhere called Vita Weitor. Bridgeden I’ve never heard of, but Vira Weitor I’ve heard spoken of by several people. I’d have you tell me about that. What sort of place is it?”

There was a pause, and Brandyé, who was eavesdropping from behind, thought perhaps the knight was not going to answer. Instead, he said with a sudden note of emotion in his voice, “It’s a place of beauty, and a place of ugly truth. A place of justice and reason, and a place of treachery.  When there is music, it’s heard throughout the city; and when Death calls, the cries are heard just as loud.” He looked to Elven, fixed him with a hard stare. “It’s a city of two faces, and woe to he that looks upon the wrong one.”

“Have you ever lived there?” Elven prodded.

There was then a very long pause, and all Tharom would say was, “Aye.”

Some time later, Brandyé thought over the man’s words, and later that night he spoke to Elỳn about it. “He holds the city dear, doesn’t he?” he asked.

She sighed, staring into the campfire around which they were seated. Tharom had momentarily retreated, and she said, “More than you can know.”

“There was poetry in his voice when he spoke of it.”

“There is poetry in Vira Weitor.” She smiled slightly. “You have never heard such music, Brandyé – even among the Illuèn, Vira Weitor is known for it.”

“Is it beautiful?”

“The City of White Stone,” she said. “That is what its name means. Ah, but be careful!” she added as he looked away, imagining. “Names can be deceiving.”

So their journey continued, and two days later, just as Tharom had indicated, they came upon the town of Bridgeden. Unlike Hansel’s Foil it was not surrounded by walls and defenses, and they came into the town much as they had the abandoned village of Verüith Hamlà – slowly, first with farms, and then streets, and then the center of the village proper.

To Brandyé Bridgeden was far more than a village, and in fact reminded him greatly of Daevàr’s Hut, both in size and make. Stone there was now here alongside wood, and dwellings were often three or four stories high. It was a busy town also, and as they approached its center they found themselves slowed by the crowds of folk passing here and there about their daily business.

Yet even here, Brandyé was struck by the lackluster pacing of the town’s inhabitants. Not one person seemed in a hurry to get anywhere, and laughter was ominously missing from the chaotic sounds that surrounded them.

They stopped before a hostel called The Wayward Rest, and Tharom dismounted first to secure them a stay for the night. As Brandyé and Elven followed suit, Elỳn spoke to them: “Do not stray in this town. I know you have familiarity of such places, and you should know there is crime here.”

Brandyé shivered and looked about him. There was no indication he could see of treachery, though he admitted to himself that the morose, sullen and grave faces of the passersby gave away nothing of their intent. Any one of them could desire his death, and he would not know it.

“I have a treat for ye,” Tharom said, emerging from the hostel. “There’s a place near here with the best food outside of Vira Weitor.” He grinned at Elven and Brandyé. “I don’t know about your Illuèn friend, now – I hear they only eat green – but ye’ve never tasted a better pork roast.”

Tharom was not wrong, and that evening as he sat back with a belly full of meat and a third pint of ale in his hand he decided that life in Erârün was not bad at all. Given that, he had to wonder at the dismal atmosphere that seemed to pervade everywhere; even the host of their dining hall did not crack a smile when Elven told him their meal was ‘better than all the greenleaf in Erâth’, but merely muttered, “Thanks,” and moved on.

Brandyé slept well that night, and did not wake until well into the day the following morning. In fact, Elven and Elỳn had already left, and when he went downstairs to breakfast only Tylan and Richmond were there.

“Do you know where the others have gone?” he asked them.

Richmond shook his head, and Tylan said, “They went out, and told us to guard their things.”

Brandyé could not help noticing the bitterness in her voice, and offered, “I could watch our belongings, if you wanted to go out into the town.”

“Ye’re not too bright, are ye?” said Richmond, and Brandyé scowled; there was no need to be insulting, he thought. “Ye don’t know why we’re here, do ye?”

“You’re our guard,” he said. “That’s why you have weapons, and we don’t.”

“Do ye have any idea who ye’re following?” asked Tylan. “Who Tharom is?”

Brandyé sat down at the table with them and reached for the half-eaten loaf of bread. “You don’t mind if I eat?” he asked. “I understand he’s a knight – a soldier of some kind. I assumed you were as well.”

“Us – knights?” cried Richmond, and Tylan laughed a bitter laugh.

“I’m a ferrier,” she said. “Richmond here’s a butcher.”

Brandyé frowned, puzzled. “Then why are you here?”

“Not by choice, I assure ye,” said Richmond.

“Are you being paid?”

Tylan shook her head. “Nay. Pay’d not get me to come, no.”

“Ye really don’t know what a knight o’ the first order is, do ye?” said Richmond.

Tylan leaned in close to Brandyé, and he could smell the stale beer on her breath. “We’re here on pain of death.”

Brandyé’s eyes widened.

“It carries the death penalty to refuse the will of a knight of the first order,” Richmond said. “And ye’d better believe he’d do it, too.”

“Tharom threatened to kill you if you didn’t come?”

“Aye.”

“But…you have weapons. Surely you could—”

“Could what?” said Tylan. “He’d have our heads before we could draw.”

“Then…why you?”

Tylan shrugged. “I know my way around a sword. What other reason d’ye need?” Richmond grunted.

Brandyé thought long about this, and looked hard at Tharom when he returned with Elỳn and Elven later that day. While he had never been overtly friendly, nor had he seemed aggressive or harsh. He wondered what kind of man would threaten people with death in order to have them submit to his will. Even Khana, he thought, would have found some other way to coerce folk. His crew had shown him dedication and loyalty; with Tylan and Richmond, he wondered if they would even hold to their duty should they fall under attack.

They stopped in Bridgeden for some days, and it occurred to Brandyé that wherever they went with Tharom, no one ever seemed to ask them for payment, whether it be for food, or a new shoe for a horse, or the sharpening of a blade or two. He wondered at this, and coupled with his curiosity over Tharom’s apparent position in this society, he asked Elỳn about it.

“To be a knight of the first order of the dragon is a high privilege here,” she said to him. “I do not know Tharom’s past well, but I know that he did not come by that title easily. One must show the fiercest dedication to duty, and swear to die for the king of the lands, if needed.

“They are extremely competent warriors, and are seen as more than mortal men. There are perhaps some hundred or so in all of Erârün – to chance upon one so far to the south is exceptionally rare. They are known by their livery, and anyone wearing the crest of the dragon – the crest of the king – is revered with the utmost respect. That is why Tharom need not pay for anything: it is his privilege to take what he wishes at no cost.”

Brandyé was astonished. “What stops him from taking anything and everything?”

But Elỳn only smiled and said, “You should ask him.”

However, Brandyé had little chance to ask Tharom much, because they departed the next day, leaving the great town of Bridgeden behind. Whatever reservations Tharom might have had over the continuation of his journey seemed to have been resolved, for he was with them still, as were Tylan and Richmond. The two guards, as always, said little, but Brandyé found Tharom increasingly mute as they followed the road north and past several smaller towns, stopping only a night at each one. His face grew grim and severe, and every time Brandyé approached him he would spur his horse onward and past the group, scouting ahead and not returning for some hours.

So passed the final days of their journey, and as the weather held fair (though cloudy, as always) and the countryside remained pleasant, Brandyé soon forgot all thought of fierundé and Darkness, and even felt a lifting at his heart. Even Tharom’s gloom did nothing to drag him down, and he spent his time in conversation with Elven and Elỳn, and learned that Vira Weitor was the largest city in all of Erârün, and indeed might be the largest city in all the lands of Thaeìn, or possibly even Erâth.

In fact, it remained beyond Brandyé’s comprehension the exact nature of what they were to face; in his mind, towns such as Daevàr’s Hut and Bridgeden formed the largest gathering of men and women he could imagine, and he could only see Vira Weitor as some extension of these towns. So it was that he was wholly unprepared for what his eyes saw in the afternoon of their fourteenth day on the road: rising from the haze in the distance, great mountains that rose suddenly and sharply from the plains, and at the foot of the greatest one, a vast forest of towers, spires, roofs and battlements: the great city of Vira Weitor.

Personal Update

This post is something of a personal update, borne out of the need to say something to you all, even if I can’t think of what to write. It’s been about a month since we last talked, and I feel bad about that.

Lots of things have happened in that meantime, which is a good thing in a way, I suppose – it’s better than nothing! First and foremost, the biggest impact on my life has been Little Satis’ injury:

Do you see the problem?

Do you see the problem?

This happened shortly after his birthday, poor thing, when his grandfather and I took him skiing. It was only his second day on skis, and at the moment he claims it will be his last. It was a gentle slope with a curve, and he picked up a little too much speed (not a lot, honestly) and forgot to stop. The edge of the curve was bounded with a net, and when he hit it his ski twisted one way while the rest of him twisted the other. As you can probably see it’s a bad fracture, and he’s now in a full-leg cast for the next three months. Apart from the guilt and remorse, there’s a whole lot of inconvenience involved, especially since he can’t really get up the steep stairs to his bedroom. He’s been sleeping on the pull-out couch so far, which is getting in the way of just about everything. On the plus side, the pain seems to have more or less subsided for him, and he’s gotten pretty good on crutches.

 

I started The Redemption of Erâth in November of 2011, so it’s been quite some time, and I’m really looking forward to it finally being done.

 

On a very positive note, I’ve started writing The Redemption of Erâth: Exile again, and have managed to complete an entire chapter. That’s right – 6,436 words now exist in a row that did not exist before, and while it’s definitely not my best writing, it’s a chapter I don’t have to write anymore, and I’m that much closer to the end of the book (book 2, that is – there are still 5 more to go). I may even set out to write the following chapter when I’m done writing this post. I have the week off to look after Little Satis during his spring break, and there’s not much to do with him having a broken leg except read, watch movies and write.

How dare she?

How dare she?

Speaking of reading, Little Satis and I are diving back into Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows for the first time in four months – another loss to be attributed to the rather devastating depression I’ve been struggling through. No spoilers, please, but we were both outraged that J. K. Rowling had the audacity to kill off his owl, Hedwig. Wasn’t it bad enough to do what she did to Dumbledore? And although I know somewhere along the line Snape manages to redeem himself, I can’t for the life of me see how. Good writing, Joanne; good writing. I can only hope to have such mystery and suspense in my own story.

With regard to my story, I finally made the move to get my publishing company to start final edits on The Redemption of Erâth: Consolation. It should be a few weeks now, and I’ll have a finished – actual, honest, finished – manuscript in my hands, and I’ll be ready to move that little bit closer to publication. It’s terrifying, nerve-wracking, and not a little exciting to think that in a few months I might have an actual, purchasable book.

You’ll all buy a copy, right?

I started The Redemption of Erâth in November of 2011, so it’s been quite some time, and I’m really looking forward to it finally being done. Five sections, 25 chapters, 103,000 words (it was 111,000 to begin with)…it’s a hell of a novel. (For what it’s worth, the second book is at 93,000 words already and I still have 9 chapters to write! That’ll end up being about 150,000 words – eek!) I have to say that, looking back on it, there are definitely improvements that could have been made, but also parts that could have been a lot worse, and on the whole…I think I’m pretty proud of it. I just hope you all like it as much as I do.

So what’s the upshot of all of this? I guess it might be that things are starting to look up for me a little bit. I even had a breakthrough regarding the origin of my depression in therapy…not that it’s helping me get through it today, of course, but every piece of information is useful. I still can’t promise that I’ll be returning to my blog on a weekly basis, though I honestly would love to – the issue is motivation and energy, which I sadly am still lacking severely. If I can, though…if I can…

For now, take care, and enjoy the new chapter of The Redemption of Erâth: Exile!

 

Satis 2014

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